Friday, 23 December 2011

Review about Fences

I think the author’s style to describe the setting – especially, place - is so remarkable that makes the readers eager for trying figure out it. The story he had written has its own strength due to the characters he built. Besides, he also uses pragmatics in exploring the dialog. The author, in addition, used some symbols and metaphors, such as fences, the title. In my opinion, fence is a symbol of a loyalty to family; it means that Troy is not allowed to cheat on another woman. As one of the readers, the author succeeded to make my curiosity alive during reading that drama although at the beginning I had a little difficulties understanding some words, which are not listed in a standard dictionary.
About the author’s intention through this story, I will give some comments and my own interpretation. I my point of view, the author intend to show the conditions of African-Americans, as immigrants. Based on this story, I learned that there are unequal rights between white and coloured people. The white people have more chances to get better job than the coloured ones. They were often treated as things, which do not have any thought and sensibility, by making them work as slaves due to their strength in working. Through his main character, Troy, Wilson shows a dad who feels jealous to his son who is recruited by a college football team while he himself failed playing baseball in the professional league.

Nb: as usual.. ne adalah tugas reviewq.. kali ne tentang drama Fences untuk tugas Creative Writing.

Puisi untuk Remaja

Remaja
by: CVI

Remaja, masa penuh pencarian jati diri
Masa penuh gejolak
Transisi untuk menjadi dewasa
Melakukan hal-hal yang menembus batas
Demi sebuah eksistensi diri
Dalam dunia remaja
Belum ada yang benar-benar putih
Belum ada yang benar-benar hitam
Semuanya, masih abu-abu
Bagi remaja apapun yang mereka lakukan
Adalah benar di mata mereka
Sungguh beruntung mereka yang dapat
Menggunakan masa mudanya untuk melakukan
Hal-hal yang bermanfaat
Tanpa kesia-siaan yang menghiasi hidup

Semarang, 7 Juni 2010 at 07.18 p.m.

Masih tentang cerita editor

aaaaarrrrrgggggghhhhhh..............................................
aku sebel banget! tanganku hanya dua. hatiku ada satu. okey, masalah tangan, bisa diatasi dengan semakin banyak berbuat atau mengerjakan dengan lebih cepat. tapi, kalau masalah hati,, hm.. hatiku sudah sering kubuat bingung hingga detak jantungku lebih cepat. kalau hal ini dibiarkan, bisa2, aku beneran terserang penyakit jantung neh!! Astaghfirullah... Ya Allah, help me solve this challenge..

Sunday, 18 December 2011

pengalaman jadi editor

aku mau ngungkapin gimana rasanya jadi editor-in this case, dlm mata kuliah academic writing! awalnya kelihatan menarik sekali n cukup mudah. eeeh,, pas udah dijalanin,, banyak ujiannya. aku harus rela menghabiskan banyak waktuku mengedit semua essay dari ke 9 anak linguistics, totalnya 10 sama punyaku.. aku bener2 harus extra sabar n telaten n teliti. revisi. revisi lagi.. hmmm meskipun tdk da yg sempurna, aku akan mengusahakan yg terbaik utk proyek bikin buku ne..

well, selain mengumpulkan naskah n mengedit format beserta memberi saran perbaikan, tugasku juga membuat preface n acknowledgement.. fiuh.. untuk itu, q bersikap keras sama mereka agar hasilnya baik, meskipun bukan yang paling sempurna. oia, tak kalah repotnya, ketika q harus menghubungi dosen yang bersedia untuk menulis foreword untuk buku tersebut. Alhamdulillah,, hanya perlu satu kali penolakan.. baru saja aku mencetak draft essaynya utk diberikan dosen penulis forewordnya.. penulis blurb, diantara 3 orang, baru dua orang yang ngasih commentnya tentang buku ini.. usahaq seperti sales kemaren tak berdampak banyak rupanya.. tp aku syukuri ae. it means, q gak bakat jd sales finally, aku berencana akan menampilkan hanya 2 blurb.

Crazy in Love

untuk yang lirik lagu ne,, q dapat yang korea n inggris. yang inggris, ada 2 versi.. tapi intinya sama saja..



Crazy In Love (Korean)
Utgo sipeoseo, geunyang haneun marinde
Geudaen wae ireohge, nae mameur molla, jeongmal
Dajim haetneunde dasi sarange michyeoseo
Jidokhage nae maeumeur jwigo heundeuna bwayo
Geudae tteonan geu jari eseoseo, naneun ajig geudaeman bojyo
Neomu apeunde, eonje jjeum urin seoronami doelkka ?

Gaseumi meomchujir anha, ibyeoreur malhagodo
Handongan sarang haetjanha, ajikkkaji geureondeushande?
Apeumi gasijir anha, dasi myeoc beoneur chamabwado
Neo eoptneun haru haruga, neomu himideureo naege neoppuninde…

Mianhadan mar, jalgaran geu mal
Geudaen wae ireohge nae mameur apeugehanayo ?
Dajim haetneunde dasi sarange michyeoseo
Jidokhage nae maeumeur jwigoheundeuna bwayo ?
Geudae tteonan geu jari eseoseo, naneun ajig geudaeman bojyo
Neomu apeunde, eonje jjeum urin seoronami doelkka ?

Gaseumi meomchujir anha, ibyeoreur malhagodo
Handongan sarang haetjanha, ajik kkaji geureondeushande?
Apeumi gasijir anha, dasim yeocbeoneurchamabwado
Neo eoptneun haru haruga, neomu himideureo naege neoppuninde

Ama geudaen, ama geudaeneun mollayo,
Jogeumssig geudae gyeote seouneune opseojindaneungeol
Tto hanbeon neoreur segyeodo ; nae maeumi neomu baraeseo
Ijen saranghandaneun geumari jeom jeomdeo huimi haejyeoga

Apeumi gasijir anha, dasi myeoc beoneur chamabwado
Neo eoptneun haru haruga, neomu himideureo naege neoppuninde…

Crazy In Love (Translation in English Versi 1)

I only said it because I wished to smile.
Why cant you understand how I feel?
I promised myself but again, Im crazily in love.
Its gripping me viciously and controlling me.

I am standing where you left
And am still watching you
It hurts so much when will we ever
Become strangers?

my heart cant stop pounding
even as we parted, we still loved each other
it still seems like that now
The pain doesnt wash away
Although I tried several times to endure it,
Its so hard to live day by day without you.
Youre my life.

Words like sorry and goodbye
Why do you hurt me so
I promised myself but again, Im crazily in love
Its gripping me viciously and controlling me.

I am standing where you left
And am still watching you
It hurts so much when will we ever
Become strangers?

my heart cant stop pounding
even as we parted, we still loved each other
it still seems like that now
The pain doesnt wash away
Although I tried several times to endure it,
Its so hard to live day by day without you.
Youre my life.

You, you probably dont know
Little by little, we are
disappearing from you
even if I put you back in my life, because my heart is worn out
Words like love
Are starting to fade away

The pain doesnt wash away
Although I tried several times to endure it,
Its so hard to live day by day without you.
Youre my life.

Crazy in Love (Versi 2)

i just said it just to laugh
why can't you understand how i feel
I promised, but I am crazily in love again
it's so cruelly gripping my heart and shaking me

as I stand at the place where you left
I still only look at you
it hurts so, when will we
become strangers...

my heart doesn't stop
even if we said goodbye, we still loved each other
it still seems like that now
the pain doesn't wash away
even if i try to endure it
it's so hard to live day by day without you
you're my life..
.
words like i'm sorry and goodbye
why do you hurt me so
I promised, but I am crazily in love again
it's so cruelly gripping my heart and shaking me

as I stand at the place where you left
I still only look at you
it hurts so, when will we
become strangers...

my heart doesn't stop
even if we said goodbye, we still loved each other
it still seems like that now
the pain doesn't wash away
even if i try to endure it
it's so hard to live day by day without you
you're my life..
.
you, you probably don't know
the word "we" is slowly disappearing by your side
even if I promise again, my heart is so worn out
that the word I love you
is starting to fade away

the pain doesn't wash away
even if i try to endure it
it's so hard to live day by day without you
you're my life.

Love is Punishment by K.Will


Love is Punishment (English)
I should have not looked at you
i should have lived in another world
if I lived without knowing you
I wouldn't have known this pain

even though every day I erase you
even though every day I throw you away
my heart has already hidden you inside
and is not willing to let go, calling that love..

I believed love was happiness
love that can't be spoken is a punishment from the heavens
my heart hurts every time I love you
because you live, wiping away your tears

I have forgotten that you are my punishment
my lips have forgotten you too
I'm only scared that
I might get drunk and tell you that I love you

I believed love was happiness
love that can't be spoken is a punishment from the heavens
my heart hurts every time I love you
because you live, wiping away your tears

should i love in my dreams
as i cry and cry again
and fall asleep in tears
it's always the same after I wake up

I love you, I love you like this
without anyone knowing, at a place where you aren't there, i'll say I love you
for the fear that you may run after hearing it
I love you without anyone knowing it ...

 Nb: beberapa hari ne q lg gandrung OST nya Brilliant Legacy.. salah duanya adalah Love is Punishment n Crazy in Love.. ntar q repost lirik yang Crazy in Love. untunge uncle google tak hanya menyediakan yang korea saja tp juga dah da terjemahan ke inggris n indonesia.. tp q lbh mudhenge yang diterjemahkan ke inggris.. yg indonesia, aneh.. hehheeh

Saturday, 17 December 2011

Kamu yang di sana

awalnya,,,q menjalani hidup secara wajar n bahagia..karna q berada di tengah2 org yg yg menyayangiq..

namun,,,tiba2 dirimu hadir mengetuk pintu hatiq yg terdalam..

q berusaha utk tdk membukanya..karna q takut..bknkh shrzx,q mengutamakn cinta pd kekasih pertamaq..

tapi ,lambat laun q tak dpt menahan diri..q tergoda..

q sangatz malu mengakuinya..

ternyata,sprtinya kau mmg bkn org yg ditakdirkn tuk q cintai..

but,why do my heart choose u become a star in my heart???

Vuji_Mee aka CVI
Pasuruan,,, Desember 2008

SMS Kaleng

aku diam bukan berarti aku LUPA pdmu..
Kesenyapanku bukan berarti aku TAK PEDULI akan dirimu..
Percayalah !
NAMAmu selalu ada [ dan terukir indah ] di dalam hatiq..

Nb: iTu adlh smz dri sese0rg yg gak mau menyebutkn idntitazx bbrp wktu yg lalu..
btw,, kejadian ne dah jadul bangetz..seingtq ne adalah note fbq yg q tulis ketika hendak pelajaran TIK ato Ujian praktik (sempet2nya...hahahaah)?? sekitar on Tuesday, May 12, 2009 however,,,sebenernya q dah dapat sms ne jauh2 hari sebelum tgl itu.. biasa,, ngendon dl d kpla..

Ur Life is Ur Choice

Life will be beautiful if u pass it happily,wholeheartedly,n of course made ur mind free from everything tht make ur life stuck
N don't 4get to create ur own dream n realize it!
Keyz!
Keep spiritz!

Dum spiro, spero . .

By CVI

Cathar in Semarang

Well,dah 2 hre ne q menghirup udara Semarang. N dsini,wuich..panaz bgtz.
Kmrn mlm,dah shopping d ramayana..
Td pg,k kmpuz tembalang,psar johar,n berkeli2ng Semarang by buz k0ta..
Anehx,knp typ mau balik ke tmpt k0stq sll nyasar? Klo nyasar d pasar johar(kyk tadi) mgkn msh wajar. Cz bru prtama X ksna. Lha ini,tmpt k0st? Q yg bbrp X shari mezti klwr rmh..
G lucu banget lah..
Mdh2an bsk2 gak nyasar lg..

on Thursday, August 13, 2009 at 9:54pm

Vuji_Mee

Be Better or Be Worse

Akan selalu ada suatu keadaan,kenangan,dan orang-orang tertentu yang pernah singgah dalam hati kita dan meninggalkan jejak langkah di hati kita dan kita pun tidak akan pernah sama lagi seperti kita sebelumnya . .

Nb: quote dari novel 5cm

Keliling Semarang Naik Busway

Semarang,17 Oktober 2009 11.45pm

Hr sdh larut mlm n kakiq pegal. Tp,mtaq enggan tuk trpejam.Pdhl,sharian ne capek bgtz.
Pg2 nyuci bnyk bju. Sore hri, d ajak tmen2 k0st jln2 keli2ng kota Semarang naik busway. Krna suatu hal,hmpr ga bs blk k k0st. Untngx, msh bs slmt. Abz muter2 Semarang, sight seeing n bl mknan d CL . Tak puas, kami jln2 k SIMPANG LIMA beli brg2 n aksesoris. Blm tuntas, gerimiz dah keburu turun.. Akhrx, kami brteduh d Rmayna bbrp saat n mutusin bwt blk k k0st.
Capek. Bner2 hr yg melelahkn..


Nb: ini sebenernya udah luamaaaa bangetz,,, pas awal2 terdampar di Semarang.. n pertama kali q tls d note fb.. krna belajar dari pengalaman sebelumnya,,,lp password blogspotq,, akhire q akan sering2 bka blog ya dengan menulis ulang catatan2q dari fb, salah satunya..
semoga bakalan langgeng ma blog ne.. n masih bisa mengurus blog yang lainnya (loh???*efek punya banyak blog n jarang dibuka.. hahahahaha abisnya,, bingung..tulisan2 numpuk di folder2 komputerku n penuh coretan di buku harianku.. hmmmm*)